“With new life comes joy, love, and happiness.” Mother always told me, so why do I feel like this? Confused, exhausted, out of control. Where is the sense of adoration that I was promised? Dead eyes and empty smiles.
I really like how you have portrayed PND… I especially liked ‘dead eyes and empty smiles’ and I’m wondering if you could have used more of that to show how she was feeling. Well done with so few words!
Thank you for this! That’s pretty much how I felt after I had my colicky first baby. I hate how society makes you feel like something’s wrong with you if it’s not all unicorns and roses.
Thank you for showing the other side of what bringing a child into the world can be like. Well written.
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Thanks for your kind words, Belinda!
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This is such a powerful piece! It does so well showing the other side of childbirth.
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Thanks for reading, Melony! I’m so glad that you appreciated this piece.
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Good that you highlighted the baby blues. Not everything is rosy as movies portray.
Good take.
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I really like how you have portrayed PND… I especially liked ‘dead eyes and empty smiles’ and I’m wondering if you could have used more of that to show how she was feeling. Well done with so few words!
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Thanks for the kind words, Sanch! I feel that PND is of such importance it should be highlighted more often.
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Motherhood is not always what it’s cracked up to be. This was powerful
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Thank you for this! That’s pretty much how I felt after I had my colicky first baby. I hate how society makes you feel like something’s wrong with you if it’s not all unicorns and roses.
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Thanks for reading Jen! I’m glad this piece resonates with you, and I agree, there’s too much pressure to do everything the ‘right’ way.
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